Leila, Jess, Evie, Morven: Your treatments look great in Canva but need editing:, it is not clear exactly what happens to the heroine in the basement. If we are in horror story territory, indicate in the treatment what the 'whole different dark world' is.
Will there be any 'realistic' bad treatment? Is the implication that the cod liver oil is drugged?
Leila - your 'similar film' is Dirty Pretty Things: does this tell me that your heroine risks being attacked physically / being subject to forced organ transplant? Do you plan to add to this with other films?
Morven, Evie, Jess - what are your 'similar films' likely to be?
Casey, Ross: Could you two decide what your 'similar films' are likely to be?
Ross We can have a word about social groups and issues
Harrison, Christina, Jake: Could you three decide what your 'similar films' are likely to be?
Charlie: Your TREATMENT is on the short side (it looks more like the Topline & Big Question post). Can you flesh it out? In Tom's work he writes about 'a scientific experiment that goes horribly wrong'. Can you three write a bit more about what kind of establishment does this research / development work
Is this post here potentially part of your future SIMILAR FILMS post ? Do you have a post on CONVENTIONS like Tom's one here?
Tom: I looked in your initial development to get more of an ides about your film and hope that you three write a bit more about what kind of establishment does this research / development work.
Alex Could you three decide what your 'similar films' are likely to be?
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